An informative slide show presentation with audio from the guys at marketingexperiments.com on what the real objective of a headline is supposed to convey. The goal of your headline is not to sell. Define your objective, make it clear, and focus on what elements will make it effective. Questions can work because they can be conversational, but it can just as easily backfire. If the goal of the email is to sell you, then sending a person to a landing page to sell the user again, is not necessary. Understand who you’re talking to and initiate a conversation in a more modest tone by connecting to the reader. Headlines interupt a frantic search or scan of the page, giving the user a glimpse of something promising, while the sub-header provides the key transition, doing the heavy lifting. The headline stops the conversation, and the sub-header re-initiates the conversation sufficiently, leading the reader to the first the paragraph. The first paragraph then begins to do the selling. Cut the copy as much as possible to effectively sell the product or concept.
Three key points that were emphasized:
- Clarity over persuasion or spin, is the reason to move on to the next line.
- Relevance to the audience, communicate it. Connect the value proposition between elements, from headline to sub-header to paragraph to the call to action.
- Credibility is key when a person is inundated with emails.